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Introduction to prose assignment "My First Prose Essay"

Here we go. Becoming an English literature student isn't as easy as people think. This time I've posted my first essay for the "Introduction to Prose" as final assignment. Enjoy (?)

Women’s conviction and loyalty side from Mason’s Short Stories

“Residents and Transients”, a short story written by Bobbie Ann Mason, point out Mary Sue, as the spotlight of the genuine character within the story. Usually the main character which focused on woman’s role indicated the real side of woman’s independence only. However in his story, Mason tries to make the women character showing the independence and also respect to her couple at the same time, running balanced out. The simple one is from what Mary said “But now I do not want to go to Louisville. I do not want to go anywhere” (Mason 118). It can be concluded that Marry has her own preference on the strength of her self-pride. “I quake at the thought of a rec room”.  I  tell  Stephen,  "I know this  is  crazy, but  I  think  we'll  have  to  set  up  a kennel  in  back for the  cats,  to  keep  them out of traffic" (Mason 121-122). On this part Mary is showing her intransigence about the opinion of buying new house which Stephen really wanted for. Mary made the cats case as the reason of her refusal. As a sync, Mason then expresses Mary’s mind through “Stephen  travels  to  cities throughout  the  South, demonstrating  word-processing  machines, fancy  typewriters that  cost thousands  of dollars and can remember  what you  type. It doesn’t take a brain like that to remember eight cats” (Mason 119), in this sentence she indirectly acknowledges that Stephen is generally smart. Thus she still put trust on him.
In other Mason’s short story “Shiloh” the woman character on the story, Norma Jean also takes the strong woman’s role. It’s showing on the way she exercised her arm’s muscle using the three pounds barbell. She somehow feels safe if she could take care of her own self. In this case Norma Jean makes her recent activities as the treatments for the pain that she got surroundings. Other than that her husband, Leroy Moffitt is struggling with his injured legs. And Norma Jean secretly feels somehow unhappy that Leroy stays along day at home, without working or doing something profitable. It’s also caused her flashback moment. When she reminded of her died son, Randy, in such a way it makes her mind a bit uncomfortable and fidgety. The feeling of suffer from a loss of her precious, sink down on her remembrance. But she keeps quiet. She still respects her husband for a while. Fortunately she can tolerate the grief from her couple, and tries to leave it by doing something which leads her to the more positive ways. However as a deviation, Norma Jean’s addiction to the cigarette during that era and culture, which mostly noted that women should not to smoke, successfully showing the negativity effects of her excessive stress. Somehow leaves the impression of depression woman’s case.
 And we could find on “Shiloh”--“I don’t want to live in any log cabin” (Mason) Norma Jean expressing her refusal about his couple’s decision. Even when Leroy tried to assure her by saying “It’s not a cabin. It’s a house” (Mason). Norma Jean replied with “I don’t care it looks like a cabin” (Mason). Means she’s really considered on her thought and figuring things out. In other way it can be concluded that she doesn’t want to live with Leroy anymore. So she just wants to end her live without him, not depend on her couple again, nor be mixed up with his life.
The vacillation which happened on these two women involved both emotion and feeling that still outlined blurry by Mason. It May be possible if this is also specifically technique which Mason rely on. The fervency of “love” that is commonly property by women on that era takes a big constellation. A good woman believes on pure love, which stands and trusts for only one man. Notably for married woman, she must take her husband’s orders dutifully. When Mary said "I can’t imagine living on a street again," I said to my husband. I complained for weeks about living with houses within view. Indeed cornfields” (Mason 119).  This illustrated how much Mary having desirability which is adversative from Stephen’s.
The dominance of women’s rising on that era also influences Mason’s story line. On the early 20th century the gender equivalence as well as womanhood issues was loudly excavated. The culture which fetter women’s right became descend step by step with the furtherance of gender equivalence. Rigidity, feminism, affectation, both illustrated on the women figure’s character. Strong character mostly expressed through the women’s casually thought. The way that the women character thought about facing the situation, solving the problems, or thinking the man’s role of her life, pointed out in the deep feeling expression inside that Mary and Norma Jean felt.
Somehow both Mary’s and Norma Jean’s ending are trapped with the ambiguity choice. This could be the result of the balance between the vacillation and loyalty within themselves which on the other side conduces obscurity. “I can't remember what signals passed between us, but it was suddenly appropriate that he drop by” (Mason 120). It seems like Mason tried to depict Mary’s interest to Larry as a diversionary from her ambiguity feeling for Stephen. Because then she said “His  voice is  so  familiar I can almost  see  him,  and  I  realize  that  I  miss him” (Mason 121). This can be considered that even she has the old love story feeling blowing again, yet she still wants to keep her relationship outlasting with Stephen. Also on this part “I would not have called Stephen a Yankee. I'm very much  an  outsider  myself, though  I've  tried  to  fit  in  since 've  been back. I only  say  this  because  I  overhear  the  skeptical and desperate  remarks,  as though  the town  were being  invaded” (Mason 118-119). It’s also mean that even she feels somehow frustrated with the current condition but then she still values Stephen’s presence as her only husband. And rethink about agree her husband’s decision.
 Several example things which illustrated how the woman character tried to choose a decision or infer her true feeling are, first when once Norma Jean asserted through her statement, that some of other women may like a man who keeps wandering. This is honestly her feeling about Leroy existence in their house that makes her doubt and getting startled. The reasons could possibly because she wanted to feel safe from the afflictions that caused by Leroy, or she just want to be alone because she likes the previously condition, feeling at peace, freedom without any disturbance from her husband. Norma Jean also said that she wants to leave her husband, Leroy. It’s her final decision however this statement is still ambiguous because of the “leaves” meaning of her words still could not define that she just want to live separate from Leroy or divorce with him, but also she tried to leave this world “forever” known as commit suicide. This thing could be happened because of her sturdy pretension to quickly get rid of her worldly problems. Also it might be a certain kind of frustration which is become bigger, or the loneliness sense that covered unto herself.  
Other example is on “Residents and Transients” when Mary spent her time with Larry then suddenly Stephen called her that he already found his “ideal house” but Mary replied with "I don't care what it looks like" (Mason 121). On that situation Mary once again expresses her indirect protest, but still even she feels like don’t care yet she cares about the house investment. No other than because it’s also affect her life, her marriage life with her husband. After the “on phone contradiction” about the house investment, Stephen tries to make concessions and assures Mary to give her agreement. Mary constantly could not agree, even she makes the comparison of the house investment by her father’s opinion. The seeking of agreement failed. This condition described her discomfort that Stephen won’t believe what she already believes. “Mary’s increasing anxiety about her own identity and her sense of paralysis before the choices confronting her become apparent” (Price 22).
Otherwise Mason depicts Mary’s final decision by her luck depend on her cats. The cat’s eyes involved as her last consideration. Mary feels she could make it. As Mason writes on “He makes me think of liquidity, investment postures. I see him floppy as a Raggedy Andy, loose as a goose.  I see what  I  am  shredding  in-  my hand  as I listen. It is Monopoly money” (Mason 127). That sentence tells that Mary standing still for her opinion but it could be changed anytime based on her “luck”. As in line with Price’s statement which is explained “the final image of the story is typical of Mason’s concluding images in its ambiguity. It evokes Mary’s new receptiveness to change, but she is still watching herself waiting, rather than acting” (Price 23).






WORKS CITED
Mason, Bobbie Ann. “Residents and Transients.”  Shiloh and Other Stories. 1982.
       New York: Modern Library, 2001. 118-127. Print.
Mason, Bobbie Ann. “Shiloh.” New York: Harper, 1982. <http://www.stjoe.k12.in.
        us/ourpages/auto/2013/8/26/54365384/Shiloh.pdf>. Web. 9 December 2014.
 Price, Joanna. Understanding Bobbie Ann Mason. South Carolina: University of
     South Carolina  Press, 2000.